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Kristy's avatar

I absolutely loved this poem. When beginning to read it I felt a sense of loneliness darkness you could say. Yet, by the end it opened my eyes to all life’s grand possibilities if I could just see past all the anxiety and stress and live the moment and remember the memories as they are meant to be remembered

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Roye Segal's avatar

Kristy, I can't tell you how much this means. Thank you so much for reading and sharing ❤️

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A Sprunt's avatar

Fantastic loved it

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Roye Segal's avatar

Thank you!

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Tracey Carnahan's avatar

Was afraid to read it because of the title....loved it when I read it. Rebirth.

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Roye Segal's avatar

Thank you Tracey. I may just retitle it "Rebirth" based on your suggestion!

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Tracey Carnahan's avatar

No way...your title is perfect!

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Heather Johnston Brebaugh's avatar

Oh, I thought, I wanted, not to love this poem. Your title scared me. I thought it would be a downer. But oh, what a beautiful way to reincarnate yourself! I really, really love this poem. Thank you.

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Roye Segal's avatar

Thanks so much Heather! I was experimenting with a more provocative title for this one, just to see if it would indeed turn people away, or make them curious. I'm glad you decided to stick with it!

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